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我们来看一篇以Wild Animal为Topic的大作文。 首先看一下题目:
Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
显然这道题是属于agree or disagree类型的,对于这种题型,第一步就是要确定你是agree, disagree还是partly agree. 就这道题目而言,要么选择保护动物,珍视动物资源,要么选择无需保护动物资源,似乎很难做到partly agree。Simon也建议大家选择“Completely disagree”。
确定观点之后,我们一如既往地,need a 4-paragraph plan.大家先试着写一下自己的plan,写好后来看一下Simon写的:
· Introduce the topic (rights and protection of wild animals), then answer the question (completely disagree)
· First reason why we disagree . our duty to protect animals, their rights and place in the world
· Second reason why we disagree . the resources we should use to protect animals, and why this is not a waste
· Conclusion: repeat / summarise our answer
如果把写作文比作盖房子的话,那Structure就是房梁,房梁搭建好了接下就是最重要的环节,填补Ideas。你能不能为第二段和第三段想到有深度有见解的Ideas将直接决定你的考试分数。所以大家平时要多多练习写作,尽量多的去为想论据,丰富中心思想。
而对于Introduction和Conclusion段落,大家要记住Simon的话:
The introduction and conclusion should be short, quick and direct. If you want a high score, spend your time on the main body.
我们来看一下Simon是如何写首尾段落的:
Introduction (topic + general answer)
Some people argue that it is pointless to spend money on the protection of wild animals because we humans have no need for them. I completely disagree with this point of view.
Conclusion (paraphrase the answer)
In conclusion, we have no right to decide whether or not wild animals should exist, and I believe that we should do everything we can to protect them.
大家可以看出,Simon写得简短直接,干净利落。首段引出Topic直接给出观点,尾段复述观点。文章的重心全部放在Body Paragraph,再次印证了那句“思想境界有多高,分数就有多高”。
满分范文:
Some people argue that it is pointless to spend money on the protection of wild animals because we humans have no need for them. I completely disagree with this point of view.
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